I record their trace--
A dog, a runner, bare feet--
Wave erases all.
Note: Originally I posted the final word in this haiku as "it." But "it" just sounded like a bad note to me, clunking at the end. So a few days later I changed "it" to "all." Better...but I'm still a little unsatisfied. Anyone else have a suggestion?
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Lovely! (You make me want to go for a run on the beach tomorrow!)
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